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Nanowrimo day 4.Day 5Adaptation and change was the job for the guides to make smoother. Allow the transition into the new life work smoother. No need to shock people. Put them in the middle of some massive maze with no information on what to do and expect them not to freak out and do themselves harm or others around them.There was always a period of transition from the old to the new. From the known to the unexpected. Change, however you hated it always happen at the most unexpected times and places.Bobby had to come to turns with this. Lisa as she sat eating her meal and watching him play with his food. Watching others around her who were in the same mind set and who were trying to come to what this all meant.To her it felt like the plague was set forth onto the dining hall and stole people’s energy and desire to talk or be human. Zombies have come to lunch and they won’t go home. Like all the past recruits and change. This too would pass.Sometimes it took longer, sometimes shorter.
Nanowrimo day 3.Felecia led her back to her room. Talking about this or that as they went. Not paying any attention to what she was talking about. It all turned into background noise. After mid-day meals. The place seemed to have become alive again. Thought Shiori. The only thing she noted as they walked back.As they entered the hall way were her quarters. She looked up at the doors opposite side of the hall. Never thought of it before, that side were all male names. Including one Bobby Smith. That boy at lunch. Hope that would not come back and make trouble.Opening into her room. Almost a complete replica as the real thing. Other than the windows that would have looked out onto Tokyo’s gleaming skyline. Along with the mass off traffic and people she would see and hear down below. A bed, with a desk and computer. Along with a Kotatsu in the middle of the room. Everything was in light colors. Pinks and whites. There was even a TV with a PlayStation hooked up.In a comment in passing, Felecia sh
Nanowrimo day 2.With nothing to do in his cage, he had fallen asleep on his bed, what must be his bed. It felt like it, smelled like it. It felt like. Like they had transported his room to this place. As he snored away. A loud knock knocked him out of his sleep. “What?” He said in a voice that must have sounded like a frog. An airily voice called back,” Lunch hour.”He stumbled to his feet, and slowly made it to the door. Opening it revealing Lisa again. His guide. More like a nanny he thought. To make sure he was behaving himself. “Well, come on. No need to waste time.” She said in the sweet airy voice. Less of an order and more like let’s go out and play kind of tone.As he followed her. He seemed to recall a girl in elementary who was like that. Who had mastered that way of saying things. Had all the boys at school wrapped around her pinky finger. She could get anyone to do anything she wanted and boy did she use it to full effect. Seemed to remember a stun
Nanowrimo day 1.Day 1Voice on the TV droned on,” It was a dark and stormy night….” It was one of those b-list horror films of the week. Light flickering in the dark room emitting from the said TV. With the flashes of light from the lighting on the TV, it sparked rays of light onto the single person in the room. Who was sound asleep with remote in hand, snoring away. Not even the laud tv was going to wake this person.Footsteps could be heard coming somewhere from the hallway in the caverness house. Steadily making its way up a stone staircase. Clicking heels on each step. Now the foot steps were in the room where the sleeping body is. With a click,” Wake up Bobby. Good grief. You have school in the morning. His mom Dorin shook him awake.She, slender build with refined hands. Looking like a lady who was raised in pervlige and wealth. She was wearing a red formal dress and a pair of black high heels. Along with keeping here curly honey blond hair bunched up aginst her head.Do
Room decryption for small school for Nanowrimo.Room deception for small school:Common area, with a kitchen, a small wooden table in a square configuration in the middle of the room. Leading into a small common area with an entertainment center. On either side of the room. There is a hallways that lead to class rooms. Each hall has 2 class rooms each. Each that can hold 30 students. There is a house style door leading to the outside.There is a set of stairs that go down to the underground. To another area of the building. This includes bedrooms for students and staff. A rec area with ping pong table, another entertainment center, couple of computers on the side with internet connection.The bedroom includes 2 twin beds. Much like a hotel setup. 2 study desks, with a desk lamp on each. Dynamically controlled full spectrum lighting, with faders. A fake window in a style of French doors. Showing a display with outdoors. Selectable by the occupant.From the outside. It looks like a house. About the size of one an upper middle class fa
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Can I go live in a dreamlandCan I go live in a dreamland like in Inception????I want to create my own world.My own heaven and hell.Where reality and dream blend together into one.Where time has no meaning.Where you have ultimate creativity.A place where I can be anything at a whim.Please let join this dreamland!
Wish I could go to some place Wish I could go to some place other then here. Hate not having work. Hate not having any romantic options. Hate being stuck at home 90% of the time. Hate not having any resources.<b>