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My heart is breaking. It straining for joy and love. For that bittersweet love. It wants to cry out in pain, and agony. It swells with feelings I can't express openly. Oh why can't I say anything.

Why can't I have some joy. instead of of this pain I feel. Wishes and happiness are gone. I feel like my bridge has clasped. Leaving me alone on this island of despair. Leaving me tormented by its beasts of depression, loneliness and tears.

Were can I go to have relief from this island of hell?? I cry out in the dark with no replay, with no rescue from this hellish island. The sea of emotions washing ashore. Bringing more torment, more pain, more sadness.

Someone please rescue me!!! I feel like I will soon drown in this sea of sadness and tears!
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This speaks to me in so many ways! Words cannot begin to describe how heartfelt this is. And do you know what really tugs at my heart most of all? The fact that I can relate so clearly to what you express in this, a very soul-stirring piece of literature.

Sometimes I read things like this and I ask myself why this is the case for the hundreds of millions who have to suffer while the rich takes them for granted: perhaps it's because Society can't take care of itself; maybe it's because the whole world has gone completely Looney Tunes on us all. Either way, this is by far the most chilling thing I've read in a long time.
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kawaiijeishi Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:iconaawplz: don't be sad! all you need is a good, loving friend to help you through your time of need.
Wild-Pirate Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
You have a breakdown. It's a major thing in a life, be courageous it will take time but you will be happy again. Very happy, don't worry.
I know that I'm talking about because I had an important breakdown there are many years ago.
WintersRead Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Photographer
[link] I wish there was somewhere you could hear the whole thing free, but I haven't found it yet. The samples are good.
IokoThePanda Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know this bad feeling =.=
Blazin8004 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
;n; I'm here for you if you need something...
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